Cardeaa's online writing portfolio

My Power Word

cardeaaisawriter — Wed, 27 May 2009 13:33:48 +0000

Observance, I feel that I am very observance and this word describe me all the way around. This word caught my eye as I was wondering threw the dictionary. Looking at the definition of the word I notice that the word was talking about me completely. This word out of four others words I looked up in the dictionary stood out more and represent me the most. Observance is a word that I can be proud to tell everyone that this word describe me and basically tells me what my future is looking like and I could possibly do for a living.

Observance which means the practice of observing the requirements of law, morality, or ritual. This word let me know that my future will have something to do with law. This word lets me know that I would either be a police, a lawyer, or a judge. This word lets me know that I would have a wonderful future if I keep my head in the game. This word is a wonderful word and I am so proud and can be able to say with joy out loud that I am very observance. Observance just by saying the word describes me.

My Feedback

cardeaaisawriter — Fri, 22 May 2009 20:25:21 +0000

The feedback was giving to me really worked. I was told that I needed to check on my grammar and punctuation. I would not have a good of paper that I thought that I would because I made a lot of mistakes. Without the feedbacks that I was receiving my readers would called me the worst writer ever. The feedback that I was receiving really helped me and let the readers understand my poems better. The feedback helped me understand that I am not that good of a speller and need more work on my grammar. The feedback that I was receiving showed me that I need to read over my work before letting anyone else read it.

The feed back was a lot a help because it helps the readers understand my point of view and where I was going in this story. I mean the feedback showed me where I need more work on and how can I get my details out to the front (where the readers can understand more). My feedback that my fellow classmate was saying was that I really need to read over my work and go over my grammar errors. I feel that the feedback was a big help and made my paper stronger then I plan or thought that it would be.

My Fairy Tale… A Happy Ending?

cardeaaisawriter — Fri, 22 May 2009 19:57:13 +0000

My fairy tale at the beginning did not turn out as I would have liked it to. So I started over a few times until I begin to feel the story come to life. My fairy tale went from not so good to were you can imagine that you was one of the charecters in the story.

I don’t care to much for my fairy tale but my classmates think that it is one of a kind. the thoughts that is going on in my head is that my writing can be stronger if i believe in my words more. I think that I can make my fairy tale stronger once if i put my mind to it.

Self Reflection

cardeaaisawriter — Fri, 22 May 2009 19:56:18 +0000

This class changed my attitude towards writing. I actually loved this class. This class let me express my inner feelings about life and my surroundings. I learned a lot in this class. I learned that I am a good writer and is able to make my readers feel the emotions that my characters are feeling. I learned that my writing relaxes me. My writing calms me down where I am barely in the story with the characters. I learned that it is more to writing then just writing. Writing is also about inspiration and heart. How much heart you put into your writing is how much progress you are going make.

In this class I learned that I must go threw struggle in order to find progress. I learned that I am not over the death of my brothers and most, no all of my writing is based on my pain over them. I learned that the only way I would express my feelings is that I would write it down. This thought me more about myself and who I am just by showing me the steps of writing. I learned a lot in this class and am welling to take the structure of this class with me on my journey of life.

My Final Project

cardeaaisawriter — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:18:00 +0000

I decided to compose poetry “chap book” for my final project. I decided to don the poetry for my final project because I like to write poetry. I feel that poetry also help me get some things off my chest. While writing poetry I get the chance to tell the readers my inner feeling in the form of a poem. Poetry helps me relax and think about what is going on around me. Poetry is something that I love doing when I want to daze off from the world. Poetry helps me free my mind and get rid of all the negative vibe that surrounds me.

I plan to write all of my poems about violence, life and death. I would like for my poems to have the readers crying. I plan for my poetry to teach the readers a lesson about life and violence. The poems that I plan for my readers to read will have the readers think twice about violence and the way they chose to live life. I plan to write poems that everyone can call their favorite and say that they love. My poems would be one out of many the best.

I would take a decent amount of time out of my day to sit down and think threw about my poems. I think about how I can make my readers think fully about life. I would think deeply about the way I would want my readers feel while reading my poems. Poems that I would use for my finale project would be the type of poems that I know for a fact that will always catch my reader’s attrition. To maker a long story short I plan on writing poems that is going to make my readers think and feel a great amount of emotions. I plan for the readers to be able to call my poems one of their favorites.

If I Could Write A Best Seller…

cardeaaisawriter — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 19:36:20 +0000

If I could write a best selling book my book would be base on life. I would write a non-fiction story. I would writye about everyday life as a young teen. Not a normal teen but a teen that grew up in a gang vs gang war. A teen that geose to funerals and spend all thier money on R.I.P shirts every other week. I would write about teens that go and went threw a lot, then still have the courage to walk around with a smile.

I would write a story that catches tyhe readers attion. My story will thje type of story that makes you feel asd if you been threw the samething that the charecter been threw. My story will relate to the young teens today. The teens that sold and did drugs. Teens that put thier life in danger just to help thier mother out with rent and to put a little money in thier pockets. My story will be one of them stories that everyone want to read and dont want to put the book down. My book will for a fact be the best selling book because it relates to the readers and conect them to the l;ife that they never experience.

My Fairy Tale

cardeaaisawriter — Thu, 26 Mar 2009 18:43:29 +0000

My fairy tale is not turning out as I planned. My fairy tale is not coming together as I would like for it to. I always thought that it would be a good story cause the bed guy is me and so is the hero. My fairy tale sucks so far but I will try to spice it up and make it seem realistic.

“AfterTwo Weeks Of Writing,my writing….”

cardeaaisawriter — Fri, 13 Mar 2009 20:27:59 +0000

After two weeks,my writing is getting so much better. My writing will make you feel as if you you is one of the charecters in the story. I am becoming one of them writers that makes the story jump out of the book into life. I now believe in my words and have the talent to make them come to life.

I am really begining to like this writing. I guess that it is because I am becoming a writer and gaining the writing talent. my writing is now something wonderful and amazing. I might reconsider changing my future career.

Am I A Writer?

cardeaaisawriter — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 20:35:08 +0000

To my understanding I am not a writer. I like the fact that I have the talent to cause emotions in my writing to jump off the page into the readers feeling. I dont like to do a lot of writing but once the pin hits the paper a new world come to life. So I ask you, am I a writer?